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This is hard to read. Constructive criticism, I hope I did not offend anyone.
Where is his Editor?

In reply to Runs

I see what you mean. I counted three or four sentences with more than 50 words...


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Comedy of our state of affairs in that country. Bad writing about bad cricket!!!! Can't get worse or can it?

In reply to Ewart

Thanks, I was expecting some strong rebuttals We can only get better if we receive feedback is my thinking.

Sometimes I read the TT Newspaper online, and I find it difficult to understanď simple reports.Some are long winded, and you get lost in a maze of un necessary explanations.

In reply to granite

Whatever happened to KISS?
To be fair isn't it the Editor's job to clean it up?

In reply to Ewart

In reply to Kay

That is not the point, it was badly punctuated with run-on sentences. Did not flow smoothly so it was difficult to follow. He basically writes the same way that he commentates. Needs an Editor to clean it up. Content and plot are good.